I love these scars These wand’ring lines Some knotted, dark Some silken, fine. They speak of pain Of life well lived They mark the years Of take and give. They mark mistakes And deepest sins When sadness fades And hope begins. Some turn away When first they see But what they fear Is what made me. The cages built Of one’s own mind Are hardest yet To leave behind. The lessons carved With sharpest knife Are lessons learned For one's whole life. I felt my pain I paid my toll. What broke me most Has made me whole.

~TheTexasLass
I agree. Sometimes we must bleed to learn. Outstanding poetry. I liked this one.
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Growing up, I was taught you can find a lesson in anything, even and sometimes especially pain. I tried to show that here. Thanks very much for your kind words!
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Hello TexasLass. I spend seven years at Fort Hood. I loved highway 35 and the kindest ladies, ever. The Texas gals. You are welcome and good afternoon from Michigan.
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You were in a good place to be. It’s a lovely area around there, cedar fever or no cedar fever! Stay warm up there in Michigan.
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Thank you TexasLass.
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You’ve got the right idea! Scars are the ‘take and give’ marks of a full life. It’s a great topic, especially the scars are ‘what made me whole’ idea. I liked your poetic ‘wand’ring’ lines. My favorite verse begins, The cages built … . I can easily identify with that sentiment, as I find myself in a few cages of the mind of my own! Have to say this though about the hands … anybody we know?
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Thanks! Overthinkers such as myself often get stuck in those mental traps, so I figured I had better pay homage to those struggles before I second-guessed myself and made a whole other mind cage about it to get bogged down in. I can think of a few people I wouldn’t mind seeing those hands on. Whoever they belong to, I hope they’ve got a lot of Band-Aids.
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Beautiful! I truly am enjoying these poetic pieces on your blog! Lovely job!
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I’m glad! Thank you! 🙂
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